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Within Reach Once again traveling a road that has been ventured on, once before. Darkness prevails yet the light widens near the end, as this soul continues it journey. Reflection is made upon the first venture and comparisons are made. The mind focuses on the differences and the inevitable… Reaching, finding only air Grasping that, which isn’t there Oblivious, yet recall maybe a final rite In the tunnel, light and a silhouette Horsemen ride, an ominous site A figure shines within the passage, at a distance Thus lifting this soul Ells no longer within this route Truth endures, no longer ramblings Visual now, air with brilliance a soothing mist upon the spirit No protrusion from within this cylinder Mind transcends, so little fear Memory begins to finally clear These eyes are now open Awaken for a sliver of time Repeat performance, no longer blind Horseman ride, no sense of fear Movement felt, no slipping tear This road will only gain in brightness… |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2007-09-24 22:50:02
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Thomas,
It almost sounds like you are resigned to die!
You feel like you will be in a brighter tomorrow.......ok
But lets live each day as if it were a gift, tommorrow will take care of itself.
Your every moment is a blessing to the rest of us.
We are all one!
I pray you aren't quietly waiting to die/that makes me sad.
Your poem holds every kind of emotion.You do a good job.
My best to you
Dellena