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Duchess of the Sea The blue pacific sky So clear I could see forever Warm rays of the sun seemed to dry the ocean spray in the air The duchess of the sea was calling me Out of my sleep and into the sea. she whispered As I sat up to hear her more clearly, sand fell from my hair And the lull of her voice enchanted me into the sea. I ran quickly to the sea grabbing my mask and fins after a few strokes, she slapped my face with water from a cresting wave her playful beckoning of my attention, come play with me my darling she gestured with each breaking wave, my pulse stimulated with each stroke Descend with me to my boudoir beneath the sea you can accumulate abalone as we go, countless to your craving we took a deep breath, then submerged, the sun faded far from view a swirling bally as we descended in the blue green depths to her aquatic realm We waltzed to the crystalline cascade of bubbling beauty euphorically enslaved by her erotic enchantment in such splendor taking a few abalone, then I faded into her arms in total capitulation I am incapable of escaping the beguiling, bewitching beauty of the Duchess Stay my darling for the millennium, your heart shall belong to me the rapture of her resonant, radiant beauty fills my mind with immortality she fades from view, taking with her my last anticipated breath, as my lungs filled then magically I could breath once again as the ebbing tide awakens me on the sandy beach. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2007-11-05 21:43:17
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.62500
Paul,.
You got involved with the Little Mermaid and lived to tell the tale.
Wonder what your dream meant?
Something about loving I think.
A pleasing read.
Dellena