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The Misguided Life is the unending journey Interwoven into the fabric of ever Days spill forth, an on stage play Script written, read, followed By all that came before And those that come along Never questioning nor Daring proof be bared Blindly trusting: elders, government, Priest, teachers, and parents Doing exactly as was taught And passing it on to ours Endless misguided trust Thrust upon us by those That authored it all Minds snap shut in fear Truth lies forever hidden, yet Consequence still persist Used, abused, and led Like cattle to the slaughter Freedom was just a word That nobody understood! |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2007-12-04 09:40:25
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
This makes the reader think on the subject and I believe that was the intent. Your structure is well prepared and flows making it easy for the reader to understand the thought presented. You present a viewpoint and mix in the politics that make decisions. Well done.
Thanks for sharing, Thomas