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all our hands I. suppose she was standing in the rain (we sitting on the porch speaking gently) she calling (we turn the music louder dance) (sing) she waiting (we turn the music louder) disappearing away she fades (singing) she (lento) becoming space (we standing in the warm light) (we calling to ourselves softly) (leaving the porch) it was raining II. dripping from the rain her hair wet and her lips warm with the freshness of tears she singing her shallow moving to deep and ever deeper (somehow we hear) (we answer each stone) (for each tear) III. given much we assume no responsibility (she sits quietly) we build and destroy we assume no responsibility (she closes her eyes) mostly we destroy mostly we do not feel (she) (waiting alone) mostly we do not know unmoving waiting we assume no responsibility (desparate) (becoming smaller) we given much take |
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