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Unmasked

Opening curtain:         How like footlights,                     her angelic poise           a forestage illumine               to upcoming creation           in hushed reverence                    an audience awaits Scene One:           a gathering of words                               characters cast                         upon parchment stage                       birthed in the man-made milieu                           of concrete canyons                       winding    through neon jungles           standing ready           to execute its           byplay of consequence                   as her voice echoes                   thin lines of reason           in half-timbered halls                 Scene Two:           songs of spoken verse               mime           in the mouths of followers           as she hails her flock               in gilded tongues                      halo  hidden beneath humility               wings   folded in recognition                    role    predestined               performance  preordained                                             unavowed   in certainty Final Curtain:           she lingers    downstage                 and cedes to her labor           soul bared      and broadcasts                     a warm shimmering shower                     of expression           to blanket listeners in worship           a consummate artiste               conveying the           coup de theatre    of truth           to voluble sounds of             gloved hearts clapping                   in absolute adoration Epilogue:           she stands before us           in written submission           unwrapped    unfeigned                              authentic               in all her complex simplicity           it is within the stagecraft           of dialogue           that she presents herself to us           naked                 exposed           in unselfish bounty                         the face of a poet                                         ....revealed ~

Copyright © December 2007 Mary J Coffman

Additional Notes:
This was written for a dear poet friend of mine who is also an actress, and teaches acting and mime to children.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2008-01-07 11:30:11
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.75000
Mary, I love the way you broke this apart and gave us the scenes of this life within this individual. You presented it well and the format, font were great. Again you guide the reader and make them ponder upon the scenes displayed. Well done as always. Thanks for sharing this enjoyable piece. Thomas


This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-12-18 08:55:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Beautifully penned and I am certain one that has touched your friends heart as she has touched so many others. Enjoyed the format, the word flow, the images and even the sounds presented within the lines. Thank you for sharing, God Bless, Claire
This Poem was Critiqued By: marilyn terwilleger On Date: 2007-12-17 15:45:17
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Mary....what a lovely poem for your friend. You captured the stage perfomance perfectly. Your words and delivey are flawless and the flow is easy and well done. You have painted lovely images with your talented pen! Very well done...brava....marilyn
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