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THE TRIP HE HAD CHALLENGED HIS MORTALITY SEEING THINGS THAT DIDN'T EXIST VISITING MANY WORLDS ON THAT ONE WAY TRIP SLOWLY HE TURNS IGNORING ALL HE HAS LEARNED HE CHOSE TO TASTE THAT FINE POISON NOT KNOWING WHAT HE WOULD ENDURE AND UNKNOWING WHAT HE WOULD EARN CONSEQUENTLY IT WAS A TICKET SIX FEED DEEP HE'D FALLEN TO HIS KNEES HE BEGGED AND SCREAMED IGNORANT TO WHAT HE WOULD FIND REALIZING IT WAS BETTER TO LIVE RATHER THAN DIE YET HE STILL WALKED HIS IMAGINARY TRAILS BUT WHEN HIS STRENGTH FAILED THE DEMONS CONDEMNED HIM TO HELL THIS IS WHERE HE SITS SCARED OUT OF HIS WIT'S UNABLE TO TOUCH REALITY HOURS WILL PASS BY HE THINKS HE IS WALKING THE SKY SO HE ATTEMPTED THE JUMP FALLING THROUGH THE CLOUDS NO FEAR ON HIS MIND HE GRACEFULLY GLIDES ONTO THE COLD CEMENT IT WAS THERE WHERE HE LAID TEARS FALLING LIKE RAIN HE HAD TAKEN HIS LAST BREATH IT WAS HERE WHERE HE ENDED HIS TRIP THE TRIP THAT SHOULDN'T OF BEEN TAKEN A LIFE THAT SHOULDN'T OF BEEN WASTED ON THAT ONE WAY TRIP |
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