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Tragic Tragedy not yet observed, yet already passed The mind wanders, this keeps the body moving Emptiness, is where fullness once resided Adventures no longer nourish this soul Repetition, day in, day out Thoughts seem mundane, barely alive Rest is wanted, yet never achieved Joy, replaced by despair, no way out Creativity is lost, against the rules Solitude, looked forward too Thus keeping, the heart beating… |
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This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2008-03-07 22:58:14
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.76471
Thomas,
This is hauntingly full of sadness and loss, it leaves me totally bereft of words and as I sit here I'm not sure how I'm suppose to respond, like watching a friend who has lost their closet love...it leaves a hollow pit inside...wow, now that is some writing form an accomplished pen.
Best always,
Lora