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The Bringers How each yearning beckons its answer Too unknowingly to be heard. Unresolved stilled moments crowd Minds awaiting a single word. Come, come, come beats in chant As if to step out and in between That far more dear unmatched gentle fall To be already within one's dream. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2008-03-26 09:48:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I like this piece JC - it's thought provoking and written in a most eloquent style - the message is, an inspiration to mankind - to find the "ground" necessary to live, with hopes & desires - but not knowing where they are to be found. That's what I perceived anyway.
Good write - nice job,
sincerely,
Deni