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Shedding the Tears I’m shedding the tears my father could not Expressing fears he stifled For sadness constrained turns into rage Trapped fear comes lashing out Tears unshed become bitter Turning sweet only as they fall |
Additional Notes:
As promised, my submission for Fathers Day
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2008-07-06 15:32:01
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Kenneth,'
Sadness turn into rage? I'm surprised!
I guess it must come out as something.
Sometimes I feel such sorrow for the past......people dead, things undone, but I never dreamt ikt would
show as anger. But that could be so. A new insight. Thank you.
I wan't the sweetness of letting it all go...
Interesting.
Dellena