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Dangerous I am in danger of brushing against every abject emotion emoticons absent smiles, similes, and smilie sentiments alternately lay me and lay me to waste down in the end of days and sailing on the seas of praise a keel is found to navigate the music scaling the lees of the river's rumbling lest I be in haste and yet it's conditioned to always be so perdition, to go against the flow in times of peace and prosperity absent myself and a comforting hand I am silent and still and lonely I am silent and still I have peaceful intentions with a will yet I have begun and no idea where to begin this is apparently a sin to begin to know to go as it comes dancing, skating on thin discipline to cum as she shows dangling shapely limbs I am thinking again and again that I will win. with this, I begin and this is dangerous |
Additional Notes:
This a real stream of emotions poem, and I really like all the internal rhyming inside it, as in some ways they are like little whirlpools of various feelings inside myself, swirling around, as am I on this dry night.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2008-07-19 19:31:59
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Regis,
This is a bit raw and yes, different streams of emotion.
Always remember there are ups and downs. Equal to heights as to depths.
'It's great to have a good love, but know the depths reside beside them.
You will never stay up or down you will meander through it all as love and life is meant to be.
You are winning, either way.....
Dellena