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Whispers Early morning sun fell upon his rhyme, words whispered across the page. He wrote with a fickle pen and her tears, that echoed in hollow corridors. Sounds of her sighs fell on languid ears her breath strewn on gossamer strings of light. Her fingertips brushed the shallow verse, he penned in sorrow’s dress. Her too deep tears mingled with his words, that whispered like Sparrow wings across the page. Her hand reached to hold whispers of his rune, in a drop of time threads of passion bound her crystal tears. He held his quill, wrote an ode of love to her, woven with whispers inside his rhyme. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2008-09-04 20:30:23
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Marilyn,
Pretty nice, sad, lovely.
Always the thread of love and sadness as is true for you.
Very nice.
Her fingertips brushed
the shallow verse,
he penned in sorrow’s dress.
Her too deep tears
mingled with his words,
that whispered
like Sparrow wings
across the page.
I know the feeling of soft sweeping wings touch.......nice.
I'm impressed.
Dellena