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If I Had Known I often think of yesteryear's yet, reality confirms my fears. If I had only known it was our last day I would have asked you to please stay. By your side I would have been sharing memories of days when. We would share some laughs and shed some tears counting blessing for our years. Gentle touches, hearts which beat precious moments our souls to keep. Your look, your smell, your sweet taste not one "I love you" would we waste. I'd hold you close, as close could be with your warmth embracing me. If I had only known it was our last day I would have asked to you please stay. Yes, I often think of yesteryear's yet, reality confirms my fears. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2008-11-04 15:59:00
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Rene,
This has nothing to recommend it to me. Sorry.
MSS