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Hu-Man Light........... The shooting star over the sun, Which shines from East to West. Yet few have eyes to see it's best. Unable to follow the parade of one drummer, On a quest for inner peace. While living less tangled To tame the angry beast. One action, or livid expression so profound, Can make them heard without hearing a sound. I wish they could open up a portal Of perception in harmony without contempt. Frustration, vengence they need to vent. Enclose themselves and try to hide Real emotions as they roll their eyes; Over heads they need to despise. Tranquilty should rain a downpour Instill this solution from shore to shore. Dearly sending this message to many And open this pending door. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2008-12-04 23:41:41
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Poet....so nice to always find your work posted here......much food for thought within the lines of this read......going on my list for the month for sure. God Bless, Claire