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Happily Missing Potential The future beckons with promises to wipe out the past providing normality which we fear does not exist. The past grabs hold like a mother saving her son promising to keep nourishing within the severed status. The mixed minded hopeless dreamer knows the tragedy of watching the body float to destiny. Reality strikes with each beat shaking images of fear, love, tears...the core is detached from our essence. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2009-02-06 10:12:31
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Mick, Excellent thought provoking piece you have penned here. Yes, the future can only beckon yet, holds no promises. And your description of the past as a mother trying to save her son is breathtaking! I look forward to reading more of your work.
Rene'