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Ne'er Paragon We are not dusk, Mutually pleasured in all things, Or unified with one belief. We are not one moment of sanity, In screams or dreams of, Night that bewilder the mind. We will not give, Everything away in all ways, Nor touch as one man can. We are never clever at the same time, In per portion to the universe with, Levels of consciousness the same. We are not the end, Nor ever the beginning in life, Or saints to be heard; Humbled with any mans words, Vexed dander’s in violin music Screeching to the highest pentacle. We are; Very rare, Fairly tolerable melodies of songs that bring life to the world. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2009-06-02 16:56:49
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.66667
DeniMari,
Sounds like a women to me.
Humble,
It is neat to be so similar and yet so different. Noone is alike. But I'll bet compared to the many
we will find some pretty close matches.
So we are rare and not at the same time.
It is a paradigm also.
We are not fully all things listed and yet partially or somtimes we are......
I've pushed myself into a corner!
Good thoughts.
Dellena