This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-06-07 17:43:12 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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My Votes For Poems in Order

The following are the poems I voted for in order for May. Sorry I didn't save the final count in numbers but I had saved them - to post here: 1) The Goat Man - MSS - (Which is gone) 2) Upon Conducting A Class For Poets - JCH 3) Conversations In The Dark - Lora 4) In Shedding - JCH 5) I Imagined A Kiss - Duane 6) In the Cell Next to Bishop Williamson (which I believe I moved up - after noticing The Goat Man gone) 7) Masquerade - Lora 8) Made of Ink - K. Patton 9) Body Count - Dellena 10)Patterns - Regis May was a good month, we still need more critiques on poems - but with MSS back & JCH steadily guiding my hand with great patience; and all other suggestions and comments - hoping June will be even better. blessings, Deni

Copyright © June 2009 DeniMari Z.


This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2009-06-25 09:01:07
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Thank you for such kind regard, DeniMari. Some discerning choices you've made and well justified. The breadth of our consideration in evaluating anything of another's should be so informed. We refine only when we begin to grasp the difference between a floor mat opinion and one earned. That's just as important to any poetry community as the poetry itself because good poetry would go unrecognized without it. JCH


This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2009-06-19 08:46:08
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Deni, Thanks for the vote on "conversations in the dark", it was probably more of a catharic write but felt good to do it. L
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2009-06-09 09:04:03
Critiquer Rating During Critique: Unknown
Deni, The Goat Man is hiding behind his tree. He knows I want to bury him. I hope I'm guiding you in a vehicle with seat belts. MSS
This Poem was Critiqued By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-06-07 22:39:44
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Hi Deni, May indeed was a good month. Critiques are now averaging at 90-99 for the last three months or so. Thank you for voting my poem at # 5 and good job with your submissions too. They packed power and showed considerable improvement. Duane.
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