This Poem was Submitted By: Kenneth R. Patton On Date: 2009-09-02 10:13:06 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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Love Stands Why should I be dissatisfied
writing love poems?
I am in love
of what else should I write?
If I long to write about
profound, deep
and mysterious things of life
What can match love?
If I choose the uncertain
The upsetting
The roller coaster ride
Love has no equal
If I am attempting
to get at the core
Some ultimate final meaning
Love stands alone |
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Copyright © September 2009 Kenneth R. Patton
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2009-09-21 00:26:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Kenneth,
One writes for what one feels. Love is the only thing that
matters in all of life. Loving our brothers would bring us peace.
Loving God, loving family, loving friends..supporting life, animals and all.
Your subject encompasses us all.
Good job Kenneth
Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-09-16 23:22:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Kenneth,
There is no equal. I agree completely. Through the verses of your piece you have shown and reminded us that love will always have an over-arching influence of on poets...
'Love stands alone' - nice to see a post from you after quite some time.
Duane.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Andrew Hislop On Date: 2009-09-10 00:02:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Dear Kenneth
I'm sure you're right. It's been what seems forever since I felt it quite as keenly as you do.
I'm jealous.
Best wishes
Mark
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2009-09-07 19:45:40
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
and with that my friend you have said it all..........hope you and yours are well .....love holds no strings that you do not care to be attached to....and I can see from so many of your postings that you are in love. God Bless, Claire
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-09-03 01:11:53
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Corinthians
:
- Love; you're absolutely right - Love matters where all else fails - perhaps the finest emotion in life; to love a person, place or thing - an activity -
I'm pleased to know love is the foundation of your daily life - you are truly blessed,
Good verbiage, short on imagery but not necessary when stating feelings in pure simplistic fashion.
Very nicely done.
blessings,
Deni
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