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Two views of dna Most chemists have discovered that a title will not get them very far into its core, Samuel. Could it be a builded place, or could it be an ion, minus switching on, Samuel? Give or take, what is between is what they seek with hands too full to feel it whole, Samuel. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2009-09-18 12:20:28
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
MAH,
Like the repetition of "Samuel." Like the DNA-like structure. Not being very scientific, the allusion (and I'm sure you're making some allusions) and therefore some of the power of this is beyond me. I sense I dimension to this that is beyond my powers of perception. But what I do perceive I like.
MSS