This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2010-03-22 00:44:38 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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One Critique Out of Four Poems

TPL is faltering again, it's obvious that Cheyenne isn't posting so far this month, I see nothing from Lora,  or Nancy, and other poets that were revived by JC's contest. If Cheyenne backs off (which I thought might happen) the contest takes away one of the best contenders.  I've posted 4 poems, and have one critique so far this month. Yet, I have critiques 15 poems. Apparently no one was even interested in responding to my votes for February. Are we cooling off again? What has made this happen. http://hubpages.com/hub/All-Lights-Go-Out - The why of All Lights Go Out is; afterlife and signs that people receive from their lost loved ones - which do exist, which I've seen documented by over 300 mothers who have lost children, which my daughter can attest to, and what I can attest to in a clear state of mind, the dead leave us signs - and I wonder who will look for mine. I'm Hubbing now, and my writing is being appreciated and enhanced with the ability to add photos and music, and people are responding - not deep critiques and encouragement to be a better writer, to build on the foundation of a passion that exists within myself - just to enjoy the passion, and share with others. Hoping the ladies return this month, Dellena is still posting very good poems. Blessings, Deni

Copyright © March 2010 DeniMari Z.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2010-03-30 16:11:44
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Thank You


This Poem was Critiqued By: Terry A On Date: 2010-03-22 01:43:41
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I've had the flu. Must be why I'm writing about crows. Terry
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