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Magic Song If I could have a magic pen, I'd write a song that never ends. Our timeless love would be its theme, Our hearts would make the rhyming scheme. Of you would be this magic song, Your heartbeat as the rhythm strong. Your beauty would this song inspire, A song for you, my heart's desire. If my guitar had magic strings, this song of love I'd play and sing. Your voice would be the melody, Your hand in mine, the harmony. Like tears of joy each note would fall, Each word, love's sweet bliss recalled. The love we share would set the key, And the song would never cease to be. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2010-04-19 19:53:30
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Joe,
This sings like a song......sweet, full to the brim with an innocent type of loving.
Pure hopeful bliss.
Your meter s good, rhythm nice.
Title describes the poem but could be better.
The power of alchemy, Bewitched.......something defining magic.
Just a thought.
You write a good poem!
Dellena