This Poem was Submitted By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2010-04-24 21:52:29 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Hidden Tethers

Hazy recollections  of  infancy’s budding cloistered deep inside A time of birth  babe’s first breathes wrapped in loving arms Your tears of sadness  gently fell  clouding your heart A gift of life given in youth of selfless love So brief our tenure still, love for you  in this heart stays Alone; traversing many roads as calendar’s mark  invades this day Bless you Mother on this Special day

Copyright © April 2010 Lora Silvey

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2010-05-01 03:47:59
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Delicate tribute, true love never fades; this we both have found in life. Honoring those that have left before us are baby steps towards healing and she would be so proud of you, never allowing a special day to pass without thoughts of her on your mind. Very nicely done, blessings, Deni

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2010-04-29 08:53:58
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Such a poem as this always makes my mind wander. My mother having passed, there are yet mothers around me. special day, there is a whole month for "green", and mothers get one day. It is such as you that make more of the tribute than will be given by others. I appreciate it.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2010-04-26 15:59:21
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Lora, Nice poem for mothers. I especially like calendar mark invading the day. I hate a date telling when to show appreciation! Can't fight city hall on that one. Hope your mother is still alive, for your benefit. Mine died when I was 20. Never knew her actually. Happy mothers day Lora. Wado, Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2010-04-26 01:12:35
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Lora, This is a lovely poem for Mother's day. You have used some outstanding phrases; Alone; traversing many roads as calendar’s mark invades this day These lines especially stand out for me. They speak of time passing in such a poetic manner. You have a gift for this type of poetry, whatever you do don't stop writing. Best wishes, cheyenne
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