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I Blew a Kiss I looked into the starlit night, And blew a kiss into the sky. Sailing through the heavens t'ward My one true love, and softly sighed. I felt her light, a shooting star Pulsing back from o'er the Pole. I stood and watched with tear-stained eyes, As joy and sadness stirred my soul. Though hearts do ache and often long, The emptiness is not inside. Although she be not in my arms, I feel her warmth across the tides. I looked into the starlit night, And felt a kiss fall from the sky. Sailing through the heavens from My one true love, and softly sighed. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2010-06-07 11:16:19
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.90000
Beautiful poem Joe. Your imagery is jumping off of the page, with the sentiments of love, lost love - intertwined with a captive story.
Best to you, no nits, just a very good well structured, enjoyable read.
blessings,
Deni