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Please To those inside Who live the lie This urgent plea I make to thee Release the shame Of deadly games Nothing to gain From holding pain To you they lied Brainwashed and tied You up in knots You never fought Threats have no base And there’s no case In which you need Their words to heed Please find a way In night and day To learn to trust And then adjust Your frame of mind Leave lies behind Promise safety To him and me No need to fight Come to the light Find peace therein And hope within |
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2011-02-24 15:19:59
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.60000
Hi Mandie,
You are so right there is nothing to be gained from holding on to our pain. Poetry is a good way to let it out from the darkness and understand why one feels the pain in the first place. A good rjyming poem with an excellent message. Well done.
Best wishes,
cheyenne