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Pretty Things We've a harbor, where treasure, where pleasure abounds. Like stolen moments shared at soul passing, feeling something leaving, something untied now. Better than a stone upon a mound, a covered vessel curiously shaped Like an arm draped around a loved life seeping. Where we tie a thread that stays tied, to even moving bullets. Where knowing is not traded for ceremony And Where love stays in the air...until breathed in the next breath out smells of new rain Cap and bells, the poet's trade, the rattle of a tin cup settle on the mind like morning dew the sun takes up The touch of a hand becomes here the warmth of winter fire While cold only plays to purpose the sun will never tire. |
Additional Notes:
For your Valentine's Day, my "cap and bells".
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2011-03-06 16:29:54
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
JCH,
I like your way of writing.
Using internal rhyming or ends.
Is this considered free verse or what?
I'm with you for liking the style.
Hope your doing well and busy as usual.
always......d