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pale blue the skies, frame bright sun as rhythmic waters reflect the gleam; fast rushing winds brush past my face as I succumb to earthen dream. place of refuge, my place of rest Nature's bounty where peace surrounds; breathing easy for hope has come and in this heart love has been found.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2011-02-24 12:52:20
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Mandie this is a sensual and refreshing piece. The view of sky and sun, with â€œrhythmic watersâ€ sets the stage for more of the same. â€œEarthen Dreamâ€ is a wonderful simile. It makes the readers all yearn for the same. â€œrefugeâ€, â€œrestâ€, â€œpeaceâ€ â€“ the second stanza slows us down to assess that gained in the first stanza. â€œlove has been foundâ€ â€“ more peaceful than sensual, but one can extrapolate the meanings and more. A delightful piece.
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