This Poem was Submitted By: Mandie J Overocker On Date: 2011-02-24 19:27:53 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Facilitated Insiders’ Nation Abandoned & Linked Lost Years

Copyright © February 2011 Mandie J Overocker

This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2011-03-06 16:25:58
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Sounds like something is opening up. Maybe a different perspective. Cleverly written. Dellena

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2011-03-03 20:39:03
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Mandie, I cannot say I have "linked" this piece, my assumtion is an analyst was able to put together the impetus for problems somebody has had from the past. The years not so lost now, and the presetn problems, not so mysterious. If indeed this is a political poem; wow, I am very involved and cannot link the verse with the situation. Sometimes, the clueless like me, just miss the clues. A mysterious verse!
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2011-02-28 15:43:38
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.75000
How creative and I almost missed it until I looked at the title of this poem again. Nice job - See nothing in this poem to change, revise or add to - it stands on it's own accord. blessings, Deni
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