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Firefly like stuttering stars; these moments of clarity unsighted by stillness random, tangled in darkness brief blinding blinks of silence; swallowed in shadows of truth, quickly consumed by obscurity another blink, another moment, in abject surrender to the deepest dark forest of thought ©copyright March 15, 2011, Mad Moon® all rights reserved |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2011-03-24 15:47:43
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Mary,
One to ponder over and over. Thoughts coming-going like fireflies.
Very cool. Moments in a forest of thoughts.
Too many to remember.
Lovely way with words. Ponderous.
Dellena