This Poem was Submitted By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2011-04-25 20:19:28 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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Saturant Last year and since forgotten
the lilac bush came abloom today
brief again will be it's encounter
Purple colored memories flood back
an imperial aura filling the senses
How sweet it's Lilac breath
with exquisite emit it's floral scent
One wishes to linger in the fragrance
and cling to it's imbued pleasure
To pick a bouquet and vase display
the purple clustered flowers will chase
the gray of spring rained days away |
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Copyright © April 2011 Dellena Rovito
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2011-05-07 10:48:32
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Dellena, as I said before- the title is remarkable to the piece. I like what you have done in the rewrite. It is so well done it appears almost as a different poem.
Bravo!
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2011-04-27 21:21:24
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Dellena,
Your love of nature and sinking deep in to it stand out in this poem.
My favorite line in your poem is:
How sweet it's Lilac breath
with exquisite emit it's floral scent
the imagery is outstanding and thought provoking to envision a Lilac scent breathing out
the sweet smell they produce.
From beginning to end this poem captured me, took me away to a beautiful place and will
do the same for others.
The ending caps off the message and also stands out accordingly.
I love this Dellena,
well done,
and on my list,
blessings,
Deni
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2011-04-27 17:49:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Nicely done Dellena, great descriptive words that paint pleasant images to mind. With your easy flow of words and smooth lines your reader not only can invision your florals but also begins to sample their fragrance. A most enjoyable read...Lora
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