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Listen. Deeply to the silence Hear the faintest whimper The still, calm voice Listen. To your heartbeat Dive into the unknown Roll with the waves Crashing ashore Hear the rhythm of the ocean Beating within your heart Open your mind Open your heart Ready your soul Listen. To your heart It is calling you Daring you To stand in your truth With a fierce grace Hear the pressing urge The buried longing Of your soul Listen. And you will hear The universe speak Through whispers of air
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2011-08-19 14:26:57
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
This one has the depth I look for in poetry. It uses the surroundings to focus on a thought. Your best piece I have read so far this month. Well done.
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