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From Within I’m here, I’m here I hear many screams ring in my ear I’m here, I’m here then why can’t you see we are so near but there’s a divide between me and them deep down inside there’s a divide that silences to cover and hide when the emptiness fills up my being then I regress the emptiness pouring out parts of me, more or less then I hear, I hear their emergent pleas so loud and clear I hear, I hear need to listen with more than my ear |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2011-08-29 15:58:24
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
There is a "defined" message in this poem Mandie. An awakening
from the dark and the need to hear more than what your ears are hearing/or have
heard in the past. It def is on the darker side but with
hope at the ending which makes it stand out.
Very nice rhyme, you have a knack for rhyme that is impressive.
blessings,
Deni