This Poem was Submitted By: Kenneth R. Patton On Date: 2011-11-11 14:38:29 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Eleven, Eleven, Eleven

A lesson learned from Vietnam hate the war but not the man Spitting, hitting, and calling names and so much damage done Every soldier, duty bound risking life on foreign ground deserves our love and gratitude whether lost or won I believe down to my core humans always will have war But, to Universe Originator Every war is ultimate failure

Copyright © November 2011 Kenneth R. Patton

This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2011-11-20 19:20:12
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Kenneth, If people didn't want war they wouldn't support it. And people keep paying the cost of war, by paying their taxes! The soldier was duped into the idealistic thought they were fighting for freedom. While all the time they were fighting for gold, oil, power and basically greed at it's finest. We need to stop all this useless genocide. "We're all going down if this keeps up" Expressive, sincere, and meaningful write. Your rhyme subtle. good job. Not sure what 11 11 11 means, date for.........? Dellena

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