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in to Life With style “Somewhere Over the Rainbowâ€, Clouds beckon us to gaze upon pictures of dreams with fantasies plenty. To wonder and wander in a ungracious land where any man can still a heart of love meant to keep us from looking above; Past the beauty in life Listening to the devil lies will quicken any ones demise. Yet over my rainbow I can still see the beauty planned purposely by “God†in life for a gentle spirit just like me. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2011-12-07 10:17:24
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Deni, what most strikes me in this piece is the universality of beauty as seen through your eyes. Aside from the indices of the deity, there is the images and inclusivelness surrounding us.
To look to “clouds†which you link to fantasies and also must be linked to dreams, we see the images with a bit of clarity, the moment and the premonition.
“Devil†should be “Devil’s†– and still in “planned purposely†we find design. Some may purport that the design created the image- but either way “a gentle spirit just like me†remands any who do not. The fact remains that the philosophy, when addresse properly, allows for the spirit and the charity. The pattern becomes consequential, nonetheless.
A very nice read.