This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2011-12-12 00:55:11 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Colors of Life

I am colors............ Moods, mystical powers embrace my mind changing me in life a different shade all the time embraced by all flushed with feelings just the best of every meaning for anyone to make take as their own personal design expressed outward for all of time. Blue moody misfit to purple waters tranquil ponds. Silver sentiments held in hours stilled then filled with calm in white placid baths to jets of vibrant gold splashing such erotic moments when the star shines unending love in to my eyes. Trading a dark bruised heart with a soulful touch of burgundy bliss in a memorable kiss erotic red fusion hot seeds of breath; glowing amber lights over black days while inspiring golden dreams. Painting each color in a portrait of a life so innocently tinted with thousands of sights. I am colors........ Outside I can feel all shades of coats painted over all that lives inside of me.

Copyright © December 2011 DeniMari Z.

Additional Notes:
Edited version of old poem titled I Am Colors


This Poem was Critiqued By: Kimberly D Rowe-Van Allen On Date: 2011-12-31 14:30:48
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I like the imagery of this poem... It is easy to assign color with mood and feeling, and your work does that quite well. Your words make me think of the turmoil that we all experience when are feelings are conflicted and every fluid. Thank you for sharing...I may go back and read the other if it is on the site. Kim


This Poem was Critiqued By: Kay C Steward On Date: 2011-12-13 23:46:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Interesting subject, went well until it got to 'just the best of meaning for anyone to take' found this a little confusing. I am colors is a good start to the heart of the poem but it starts to wander a little at times. Could you start each line with a capital letter? And it would help the reader if you could punctuate your lines for instance: embraced by all - flushed with feeling. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Kay.
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