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On a Piano Bench in Sunlight between the G and the D notes I met you. in that space within the span of a hand, I saw nothing, I heard nothing (though the fading G was a ghost wanting to stay), but in that universe everything came and went, unannounced, unspoken, unidentified, without the distinction that brings decay, the delineation that braces for damage. between the G and the D keys, beads on a Rosary, I sat in the warm sun with a friend whom I had known before the cries resounded in the furrowed field, and I knew what it means, the rich man and the eye of a needle, the world’s gain, the line of silos and the wheat forever uneaten, and I wanted none of it anymore. in that space within the span of a hand, between the chords of distinction. on a piano bench in the sunlight. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Andrew Hislop On Date: 2012-02-06 19:38:44
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
MSS
What IS this hideously subjective business? It's a JCH quote, it's a mug's game.
I'm so stuck on "I was there", it's not even funny.
MAH