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The Keep The ides, now the sixteenth lost on the hammer-to-the-head dumb All footing for freemen, gone and a flag with stars falling, the blood Of red bands galling the dead who braved theirs to place it there Now to be kept, not in embrace, kept from like the stars laying there in your blood Spent not in courage, but in a ditch, like a dog |
Additional Notes:
Who has a clue what just took place day-before-yesterday? JCH
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2012-04-07 22:26:45
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
JCH,
My fav of yours this month. Love the placing of those commas in the first stanza.
MSS