This Poem was Submitted By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2012-04-08 19:16:17 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Sunrise Pink

Salacious pearl pink flesh lying in gentle folds enticing tongue to run along your creases Salivary glands drip soft remembered tastes  as fingers delicately pull  your bounteous treasure  forward  Your succulence within  mouth's conscription, sumptuous  repast’s angst, your flavors burst forth Alas, long awaited faire de’light, breakfast sandwich heaven, ham and egg on a bun—awe, good morning.

Copyright © April 2012 Lora Silvey

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2012-04-29 23:26:04
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Great twist with the words chosen for this "cute" poem. I have to say it was a pleasure to read and I imagine you've fooled quite a few of us with the twist on the theme. It's lighthearted and fun which really makes it stand out. Good job I enjoyed it a lot. blessings, Deni

This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2012-04-26 15:10:52
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Lora, It was a kick! As I began, I was thinking.... you wee\nt too far Lora. Too much for me to handle. What a hoot! You started my day great. We do need to smile more. Good for reminding me.... Wado, Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2012-04-16 22:47:20
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Delightful, Lora. Well done twist, humorously rendered with excellent play on our presumption. Of course, one might still wonder at end, have you identified a lover with the ultimate simile? (Rather than the other way around?) JCH
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ellen K Lewis On Date: 2012-04-09 17:43:59
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
LOL LOL LOL Lora!! Thank you for the great uplift. I love the way you did it. Had me fooled. Lol. I thought for sure you were about to break the code. lol You've got me laughing and I adore this. ~smiles!~ Ellen
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2012-04-09 15:45:14
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Hi Lora, As I read this I was thinking it was an erotic poem (who wouldn't?) The more I read the more sensual your words beccame. When I read the ending I laughed out loud. I don't know where this poem came from but it is delightful. Very different rom your usual fare but it demonstrates how versatile you are. Bravo! Best wishes cheyenne
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