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The Serial Killer Upon what squeeze the life force fled embrace, the twitching tail of a tiger Narrows (camera fades to) confines of a cubicle savagery helmed in tighter Trailing home in imagined denizen a slashing teeth to be of some sharpened dagger. The more restrained by day, the more vicious a night to swagger. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2012-09-23 23:54:55
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Hi James, It's been a few years since I have visited this site and your poem is my first critique. Yes, I remember you.
Now for your poem, different..the title caught my attention. You were always good at using what I call dictionary words...lol...that is a complimenmt...I am jealous of your vocabulary. Thanks for the read..loved it!