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Flower of the Lady Praised for beauty, splendor of devotion fragrance and touch mingle with emotion Close though falls the petals while cut stem sets time to ticking to an unthought end. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Jordan Brendez Bandojo On Date: 2012-09-22 05:26:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi JCH,
Long time no see! I have been out for quite a while and thanks that I stumbled again at your poetry. This one is very short one but it tells a lot and it truly depicts the essence of the topic. The use of beauty, splendor, devotion, emotion, petals…it’s all in there. It can tell a lot of a lady.
Thanks for sharing.
Best Regards,
Jordan