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Parched Corners

the sea rolled over on its back and beckoned me to understand the sandy shore with hunched shoulders that laughed as dried up kernels  were stolen by winds from parched corners of the sun when waves roared from the blast of sea then churned into gray sudsy cliffs and the storm bashed dunes into sand it washed away your name I carved in seashells so lovingly 

Copyright © January 2013 cheyenne smyth


This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2013-01-12 12:08:25
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Wow!!! L1 and L2 Is such a powerful image that pulled this reader in. What a thought. The Stormy imagery of this poem might be related to a break-up. Esp the last three lines. I enjoyed the entire work. Thanks for a image packed poem


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