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Crappy Days Are Here To Stay! To the tune of "Happy Days Are Here Again." Crappy days are here to stay Obama will not go away And now there will be hell to pay Crappy days are here again All he knows is tax and spend He’s spent the gold at rainbow’s end And now he’ll come for yours my friend Crappy days are here again Altogether shout it now There’s no one who can doubt it now We’ve sold our soul to China now Crappy days are here again Socialism’s on the rise Though built upon a pack of lies It’s Communism in disguise Crappy days are here again Millions out there unemployed Remembering jobs they once enjoyed For now food stamps must fill the void Crappy days are here again Foreclosure took their happy home On to the street they have been thrown With out a nickel of their own Crappy days are here again. Cares and troubles here to stay And they’ll grow from day to day But be of cheer the “rich” will pay Crappy days are here again. Crappy days are here to stay Obama will not go away And now there will be hell to pay Crappy days are here again |
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2013-02-15 14:47:06
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Howard, You have penned a good poem and while I don't agree with everything you wrote that doesn't interfer with my appreciation of this piece. Writing it to the tune of 'Happy days are here again' is very creative. I had no trouble singing the lines to that tune. Each line is well composed and quite compelling. Good alliteration in happy/home, a fluid flow, a effective rhyme and the theme makes this piece fun to read. Well done.
Best wishes,
cheyenne