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Hummingbird I am a hummingbird to Your unprotected nectar My wings beat in sweet Sync to the flowering of your love The warmth of paradise found As perfect an embrace as is sky and ground I see you now So completely new As if I were a night flower Viewing the moon |
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2013-04-09 17:55:56
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Joe,
You have written a lovely poem. I have always thought it is difficult to write about love since so many have already been written. However, I find yours fresh and evocative. You have used excellent words to express yourself and each line is well composed. Even though short it says what it must and nothing more. I have failed at picking a favorite verse or line without doing an injustice to the rest. Bravo!
Best wishes,
cheyenne