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The Other Side Of Failure Where once the cock had crowed , And sealed a failure’s grief. Now peel the bells proclaiming The season of man’s relief. From missing of the holy mark, And trusting in the thief. Chief liar who by all his craft Has tried to thwart belief. Three times rehearsed the Master Each failure brought to bear, And laid against the future task This disciple was soon to share. With love’s three voices heard With skill and gentle care The Master guided fainted heart, And defeated his despair. “Feed My Sheep” |
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2013-04-09 18:08:30
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Victor,
You have penned a fabulous poem. You have chosen descriptive words to express yourself. I understand the Religious tone and I think it may be about Jesus dying for our sins. The entire poem is powerful and evocative. I have failed at picking a favorite phrase or line as I like them all. I would like to read more of your work. Well done.
Best wishes,
cheyenne