This Poem was Submitted By: Victor David Rooks On Date: 2013-04-15 11:51:31 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Cathedral

What we see in the woods In that sanctuary of perfection No notion of shoulds  or coulds But  natural obedience to direction. Some go there and marvel  “Heaven” they say pointing  To beams that light extemporal  Who bow, but miss the anointing.  Creation displays in every day What heaven is like when all obey.

Copyright © April 2013 Victor David Rooks


This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2013-04-28 18:37:39
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 8.75000
Line 4 is my fav line.All of creation seems to have no problem finding harmony within in its self it is only humanity that seems to exsist in fits and starts. Thnakyou for a thoughtfull work


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