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In These Times The turning of our world from what was to what is sheds unending light in new days for what was and still is. Good in terms remains the same peaceful feelings prevail inside. With time there is no distance that measures hate with kind. Memories are forever; forever is until a coming of another journey with steps for open hearts that will. Spirit inside draw up the light let me drink from morn 'till night; taste to wake with peace and words to relay to those who live fueled by hate. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2013-08-03 13:13:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
This poem sounds like a prayer. A asking for words from some higher place That we with our poems might change the part of the human race that lives on hate. A very lovely poem. My fav stanza would be S3. quite a wonderful thought and poem Thankyou