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The Lion's Competition
Courage is not born within it’s fed in minimal doses. ....(Slowly like an eyedropper ...medicates the sore eye) time enough to change what is small enough; from a foal in to a mighty stallion. Entering the race running through barriers keeping fortitude in place. ....When enough has been chewed upon and swallowed it's time to stand strong meeting fierce challenges that life brings along.
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2013-09-04 16:59:22
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Deni, as far as I am concerned this poem doesn't need any help. It is written with skill and each line is well composed. The melancholy flavor appeals to me. Your word choices are expressive and compelling. I like the entire poem but your last two lines are so powerful and gives the poem strength. Well done. Best wishes, cheyenne
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