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Dragon’s Flame The dragon’s nostrils flare his breath exuding hot air trying to set souls on fire while hungry eyes seek a power higher Tears cried, do not matter their memories ‘coming sadder living only for a state of grace dragon’s fire can’t enter this place Mistakes made, the path sometimes lost paid the price, soul’s spirit almost the cost As the dragon’s fire seeks to blaze hitting thy knees, singing out the Lord’s praise Washed by the water his essence absolving sin A soul soars at angel’s sound Thanking Yahweh, no longer “Lost but Found” |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2013-10-20 19:43:58
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Beautiful spiritual poem and I enjoyed the anticipation of what you would write next from beginning to end.
Inspiring! The message comes to mind of how the flames will try to jump up and bite us in the ass- yet we know that with hope comes grace and thankfulness - to be witness and unfailing in our praise with prayer - being cleansed to original purity - Your imagery stands out and I completely enjoyed this poem.
blessings,
Deni