This Poem was Submitted By: Kimberly D Rowe-Van Allen On Date: 2013-11-04 16:15:31 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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For You...

So many memories of our life together Thought our song was meant to last Too much hurt and pain to start again Now it seems our time has passed Wish so many things were said or done That would make our tale complete But alas, the past can't be undone So with sadness, I admit defeat I hope that you will find peace again And your dreams will all come true It was always worth it in the end Taking this bittersweet journey with you I wish you love, and joy, and happy days May you always smile more than you cry Cherish every sweet moment and every breath Life is short and the time will fly So with heavy heart, I set you free Soar above the clouds and win Know that no one could love you quite like me And my love for you is without end

Copyright © November 2013 Kimberly D Rowe-Van Allen


This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2013-11-29 07:22:13
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Borrow from Poe more, the ability to reach out more broadly than self your personal sense of loss by bringing in the elements (nature, epic event, imagery, what I call parallelism) in order to stir your reader to a higher sense of identifying with you. JCH


This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2013-11-15 00:16:46
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
So Sweet. So to the point and without bitterness. It says I hurt yet I can not hurt thee
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2013-11-05 19:57:35
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
An endearing heartfelt poem Kimberly - finding love and losing love happens to everyone in a lifetime and I can feel the tug at your heart while saying goodbye and good luck yet still holding on to the love that existed when it was good. Your poem flows well and is comprehended with nicely written lines telling the story of giving all of your love to someone who couldn't appreciate it or return as much as you could. I've had the same experiences in life and wish I hadn't held on to what was lost for so long - Sometimes it's better to close the door and not look back in order for the right person to come in. Kudos to you for sharing this emotion packed write, Deni
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