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Into It Emboldening momentary look (not glance) Lingering touch almost caress (not chance) Signifying more I want given (not needing) In the instant to know steady (not passing) Is it that those that cannot possess decide for the rest as if in regress Of the wonder to hope |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2014-01-16 14:33:10
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Hello JC -
Your chosen words of adj's empower this poem making more of an impact on the entire poem.
So many good things in this piece - The emotions are very deep - and you've carefully suggested that
the giver is just what they are - they give of themselves - with passion without ulterior motives -
just pleased to make a difference if only for a moment.
I enjoyed this write,
Deni