This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2014-01-28 12:47:20 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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No Flowers On The Wall

Real beauty lies in what you can see or not see with your eyes. Spring shines with vast growths of green paled simplicity illuminate round tinted tips of live bouquets lustrous scents bestowing new beginnings Should you glance away then back to the light expect surprises missed with first sight. Yellows in unique styles blending purple edges tints of shaded white seem like one of a kind carefully placed out in ordinary space. One just like you never plain nothing exists exactly the same. Exactly exaggerates reality in aspects beyond reason in life differences take reign over precise. To see what differs imagine spiritual divine chosen angels bridges apart take flight then shine with wings unlike. Growing but with subtle changes of radiance upon capturing what you can imagine only in your mind.

Copyright © January 2014 DeniMari Z.

Additional Notes:
Re-write of an older poem with many changes -

This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-02-02 10:27:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Wow. First I am in a spring garden checking out the flowers, then then flowers more deeply then I am standing in heaven noticing the same thing of angels. Not a one the same. That was a very excellent poetic adventure Thank you

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-02-01 10:54:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Deni, I adore the implementation of color with animate world. Of beauty, it is (aside from the subset of love) the redeeming edifice of this world. I found a dual meaning (to me) in your final lines, that of the mind noticing and transferring the beauty of the world to personal significance, as well as noting the mind, aside from the apparent beauty of the world, finding beauty comprised in the attitude and dreams of that mind. The distinctive stanza for me is of the “spiritual divine” and “wings unlike”. Although this reflects more on the creator than the creation, it is still homogenous to the entire vision. Very well said.
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