This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2014-03-01 23:40:06 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Incantant

Couched in ritual     to some demon god Giving license by     cremation of care Despoiling youth     the hideous mongrels of wealth and power     despoil earth  To covet the last gasp     goodness offers Before lost innocence 

Copyright © March 2014 James C. Horak


This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2014-04-02 15:56:39
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
JC, I marvel at the depth you seem to easily find when writing a poem. First I should say with the ads here and your word cremation (if clicked on) showed me where I could find a good crematory in Denver was weird) but all in all I know you write from not only your thoughts but your soul which certainly stood out in this poem. It stands on it's own with a message well worth reading, blessings, Deni


This Poem was Critiqued By: Terry L Krieg On Date: 2014-03-17 17:47:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Epitomizes today's greedy corporations' outlook on life! Your poem brings greed to life.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2014-03-05 11:01:16
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
So good to see this post of yours James. A perfect penning of your accomplished intellect, a view into the mind of the author. How many will read, emphasize for the moment but truly understand the deeper current that runs through. Again your words echo that which you so artistically offer while this reader wonders how many truly hear the whispers of your pen instead of merely feigning interest and appreciation...does make one want to scream and shake them into understanding... Forgive me if I've digressed, I so enjoyed this poem and all its portents...Bravo my friend, well done. Lora
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-03-02 17:41:16
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Yes it seems that some in this world don't care for anyone but them self. Looking out for number 1 is the only truth that they dare. Excellent work
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